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Poetwheel
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0 posted 07-15-99 09:05 PM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

I sing the body electric!
I sing the body electric!
I SING THE BODY ELECTRIC!


Old Walt shoulda worn his rubber soled shoes...


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Craig
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Drop the second line and repeat the first line in its place and I think you’ll find you have a winner on your hands

Craig
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is that how tap-dancing was invented?


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Thanks for the comments....hardly a masterpiece, but then again, Poetic Wheelbarrow is not about pleasing the critics...
PW

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