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elvira
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0 posted 07-15-99 05:57 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for elvira



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1 posted 07-15-99 06:00 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

that wuz cool! I like to way u wrote it! It makes it fun to read and that wuz very good!
I sometimes write like that, but only on paper.

jfreak
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this would be a great greeting card. Good work.

jfreak
elvira
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Alwye
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In the space between moments


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Ah, being apart from the one you love..*sighs*. Been there. Wonderful piece.

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks


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Elvira,
been there, done that, it's hard!!!
elvira
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Very nicely done, I love the way you shaped it, and it goes with the poem, for as the poem goes along it gets stronger, as the lines got longer.
elvira
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Your revival had revived me. Don't know how I missed, as much as I keep an eye out for your work, but I'm glad I caught it this time. I guess it was meant to be.......
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Beautifully written
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You portray longing for your distant love so deftly, elvira... so much so that your feeling is tangible... it surely touches my heart.
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