Yuma, AZ, USA
Content wise I like it very much. It is so true. So many people telling us who we are suppose to be and each one saying something different it get so confusing. Good job.
Structure wise I have one little problem with the beginning that really isn't that bad b/c the rest of the poem is so good. It is only the first two or three lines don't fit into the scheme but they still work somehow. You do finish up the work beautifully though.