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This Wonderous Place

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Tim
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0 posted 07-15-99 03:51 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tim

I stroll along God's promenade
As walk along a country lane
In awe the beauty he hath made
Upon my face a morning rain.

'Side golden fields of farmer's grain
Wild flowers bloom in sweet bouquet
Cattle lowing, bovine refrain
Amid the grass in distant lea.

Down in the dell, white picket fence
Sits white cottage, of gentlefolk
Yet in my thoughts, I have a sense
Am not awake, have not yet woke.

Am I worthy of wond'rous grace
That can create such beauteous place.



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Gentle Soul
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1 posted 07-16-99 03:07 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

wow.. that has such a nice vision.. and great rythm and flow..
nice touch!

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2 posted 08-13-99 02:28 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I found this beauty hiding under a rock! Lovely, Tim as always!
Sue
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I walked with you when I read this poem.
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Good morning Sir!  Time for a repost, I think.

Yes, I do think so!
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good lines
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