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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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0 posted 1999-07-15 03:51 PM


I stroll along God's promenade
As walk along a country lane
In awe the beauty he hath made
Upon my face a morning rain.

'Side golden fields of farmer's grain
Wild flowers bloom in sweet bouquet
Cattle lowing, bovine refrain
Amid the grass in distant lea.

Down in the dell, white picket fence
Sits white cottage, of gentlefolk
Yet in my thoughts, I have a sense
Am not awake, have not yet woke.

Am I worthy of wond'rous grace
That can create such beauteous place.



[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 07-15-99).]

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Gentle Soul
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1 posted 1999-07-16 03:07 AM


wow.. that has such a nice vision.. and great rythm and flow..
nice touch!

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Poet deVine
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2 posted 1999-08-13 02:28 AM


I found this beauty hiding under a rock! Lovely, Tim as always!

Sue
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3 posted 1999-08-13 03:13 AM


I walked with you when I read this poem.
Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-05-09 07:42 AM



Good morning Sir!  Time for a repost, I think.

Yes, I do think so!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-01-01 04:58 AM


good lines
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