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Lost in Emotions

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Mark R.
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since 06-25-99
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San Francisco, CA.


0 posted 07-15-99 01:50 PM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mark R.


It seems to me,
That we shall always be,
Something less than what we wish to see.

Positions in rhyme,
Limits in time,
Leaving us with no space in which to unwind.

Blistering rages,
Upon discreetly written pages,
Building nothing but impassable cages.

Considerable stresses,
With unfeeling caresses,
Breaking my heart as it continually flexes.

All of these thoughts with only one notion
In mind,
So my love and affections you could under-
mine.
© Copyright 1999 Mark R. - All Rights Reserved
mia
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since 07-06-99
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1 posted 07-15-99 02:01 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

Very nice poem. I like it.
Nina
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since 07-15-99
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memphis,tn usa


2 posted 07-15-99 02:55 PM       View Profile for Nina   Email Nina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nina's Home Page   View IP for Nina

I loved it!!!
blueloon
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since 07-07-99
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3 posted 07-15-99 02:57 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

perfectly put into words...I love it a lot, a lot, a lot!
blueloon
Mark R.
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since 06-25-99
Posts 118
San Francisco, CA.


4 posted 07-15-99 05:49 PM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark R.

It is very nice to know that my poems are being enjoyed even by talented writers as
yourselves. It makes me feel extremely happy
to be able to write knowing that my work will
be appreciated and liked. Thank you for your
kind words.
Mark R.
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since 06-25-99
Posts 118
San Francisco, CA.


5 posted 08-17-99 05:55 AM       View Profile for Mark R.   Email Mark R.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mark R.

Okay, this is the last one sent back for review. Thanks, I feeled sort of ashamed for doing it though. (sending it to the top that is.)
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