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Open Poetry #1

Lost in Emotions

Mark R.
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.

0 posted 1999-07-15 01:50 PM

It seems to me,
That we shall always be,
Something less than what we wish to see.

Positions in rhyme,
Limits in time,
Leaving us with no space in which to unwind.

Blistering rages,
Upon discreetly written pages,
Building nothing but impassable cages.

Considerable stresses,
With unfeeling caresses,
Breaking my heart as it continually flexes.

All of these thoughts with only one notion
In mind,
So my love and affections you could under-
mine.

mia
Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 118

1 posted 1999-07-15 02:01 PM

Very nice poem. I like it.

Nina
New Member

since 1999-07-15

Posts 7
memphis,tn usa

2 posted 1999-07-15 02:55 PM

I loved it!!!

blueloon
Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

3 posted 1999-07-15 02:57 PM

perfectly put into words...I love it a lot, a lot, a lot!
blueloon

Mark R.
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.

4 posted 1999-07-15 05:49 PM

It is very nice to know that my poems are being enjoyed even by talented writers as
yourselves. It makes me feel extremely happy
to be able to write knowing that my work will
be appreciated and liked. Thank you for your
kind words.

Mark R.
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 113
San Francisco, CA.

5 posted 1999-08-17 05:55 AM

Okay, this is the last one sent back for review. Thanks, I feeled sort of ashamed for doing it though. (sending it to the top that is.)

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