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Tug-O'-War (saga continues)

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Gentle Soul
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0 posted 07-15-99 12:44 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gentle Soul

With her knots untied, and her chair has been loosened, Gentle Soul gets up.. she notices and tunnel, with some stairs.. and the sign says "Exit"
Gentle Soul walks to the door, as all of her foes turn into one.. Evil I'll call him, for that is what he is.. he grabs her arms, and screams and yells..
"you can not go! for I have you now! you shall not be released by me!"

With tears in her eyes, Darkangel brings a friend, her name is Hope, and they take Gentle Soul's other hand... she looks to her left, and the dark being with his evil eye, claims her, and taunts her.. *your mine forever! never to leave... forever you shall be!*
Gentle Soul then looks to the right, and sees her Angel and Hope. She then gains a shimmering strength, one not like her own. she begins to tug along with her companions, and pulls from Evil's Grips... they all three ran, with Hope leading, and Dark Angel behind her. Running up and up.. on the stairs, to see the "Tunnel of Light" smiling inside.. Gentle Soul did not realize, Depression and Lust still lurks around.

she walks along her tunnel again, with more than just a friend.. but a coach, an uplifter, Hope, and guide..
DarkAngel again.. by her side... leading to the light.


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1 posted 07-15-99 12:47 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Trying to humble me again? this is excellent work. You're right, your best!!

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Gentle Soul
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2 posted 07-15-99 01:08 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

oh no!! yur best!
Balladeer
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3 posted 07-16-99 03:32 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I am completely captivated as this saga unwinds. What a wonderful piece of storytelling......
Gentle Soul
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4 posted 07-16-99 03:37 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

thank you.. and I hope this is ok.. being a story and not truly a poem..
wayoutwalt
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5 posted 07-16-99 03:39 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this saga is grand gentle soul will there be more
Dragon
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6 posted 07-16-99 04:04 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Truly your best to date.....
Gentle Soul
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7 posted 07-16-99 10:35 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

Thank you all... I am only telling about my life.. and how I feel.. and I appreciate the uplifting you guys have provided for me

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lenny
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8 posted 07-16-99 02:11 PM       View Profile for lenny   Email lenny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lenny

Shades of Hannah Hurnard--Hinds Feet on High Places and Mountains of Spices. Have you read them? You would probably enjoy them if not. Smile...

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Gentle Soul
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9 posted 07-16-99 02:57 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

never heard of them.. but I will be sure to check them out! thanks.. hehe.. what a coincidence tho.. my name is Hannah!! heheh

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