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Gentle Soul
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0 posted 1999-07-15 12:44 PM


With her knots untied, and her chair has been loosened, Gentle Soul gets up.. she notices and tunnel, with some stairs.. and the sign says "Exit"
Gentle Soul walks to the door, as all of her foes turn into one.. Evil I'll call him, for that is what he is.. he grabs her arms, and screams and yells..
"you can not go! for I have you now! you shall not be released by me!"

With tears in her eyes, Darkangel brings a friend, her name is Hope, and they take Gentle Soul's other hand... she looks to her left, and the dark being with his evil eye, claims her, and taunts her.. *your mine forever! never to leave... forever you shall be!*
Gentle Soul then looks to the right, and sees her Angel and Hope. She then gains a shimmering strength, one not like her own. she begins to tug along with her companions, and pulls from Evil's Grips... they all three ran, with Hope leading, and Dark Angel behind her. Running up and up.. on the stairs, to see the "Tunnel of Light" smiling inside.. Gentle Soul did not realize, Depression and Lust still lurks around.

she walks along her tunnel again, with more than just a friend.. but a coach, an uplifter, Hope, and guide..
DarkAngel again.. by her side... leading to the light.


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DreamEvil
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1 posted 1999-07-15 12:47 PM


Trying to humble me again? this is excellent work. You're right, your best!!

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Gentle Soul
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2 posted 1999-07-15 01:08 PM


oh no!! yur best!
Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-07-16 03:32 AM


I am completely captivated as this saga unwinds. What a wonderful piece of storytelling......
Gentle Soul
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4 posted 1999-07-16 03:37 AM


thank you.. and I hope this is ok.. being a story and not truly a poem..
wayoutwalt
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5 posted 1999-07-16 03:39 AM


this saga is grand gentle soul will there be more
Dragon
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6 posted 1999-07-16 04:04 AM


Truly your best to date.....
Gentle Soul
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7 posted 1999-07-16 10:35 AM


Thank you all... I am only telling about my life.. and how I feel.. and I appreciate the uplifting you guys have provided for me

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lenny
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8 posted 1999-07-16 02:11 PM


Shades of Hannah Hurnard--Hinds Feet on High Places and Mountains of Spices. Have you read them? You would probably enjoy them if not. Smile...

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lenny

Gentle Soul
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9 posted 1999-07-16 02:57 PM


never heard of them.. but I will be sure to check them out! thanks.. hehe.. what a coincidence tho.. my name is Hannah!! heheh

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