He can turn my frowns into great big smiles. He can make my heart do flips. He is everything that I want in a man. But he has someone! He is my sunshine when I'm sad. He is my laughter when I'm mad. He has the smile that makes me swoon. He has the eyes that gleam like the moon. But he has someone! He tells me I'm pretty. He tells me I'm fun. He tells me how great I am what a great person I am. But he has someone! He makes me think that I deserve the world. He makes me believe I can have the moon & stars. He makes me think that that someone should be me! He makes me wonder what life would be like together.
*******Augchic711******* He makes me want to be with him. He made me respect him for all that he's done. He made me love him for the kindness he showed. But he has someone! He made me realize how alike we are inside. He made me want to enjoy every minute. He made me want him to share it and be in it. But he has someone! He is everything to me. He is everything that I want. He is the perfect gentleman. He is kind to me. He is funny to cheer me up. He treats me like a queen. But he has someone!
Very nice poem Augchic. Just a little word of advice. If he knows he is doing this for you while he has someone then he probably isn't that great of a guy. If he is doing that then he is playing both you and that "someone". And if he is doing that do you really want to someday be that "someone"? Just some food for thought.
O'Fallon, IL, USA
thank you all for your kind words and jfreak you always give me food for thought keep it coming but to answer your question he has no idea that he does this for me he is my best-friend! but good luck to you all in life, love, and writing!
In the space between moments
I have to agree with jfreak....this guy sounds like he's playing off both you and his 'someone'...he shouldn't be making you feel like this if he's committed to someone else. What if you do get together someday and then you're his someone..will we see a poem posted by the next girl he flirts with? A word of caution...............
O'Fallon, IL, USA
Thanks for the compliment Balladeer and I do agree with you it's easy for some to say not to let him get to me but everyone always says that you fall in love with your friends and I truly believe that friendship is stronger in the long run. So thanx everyone for your opinions.