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Someone i wish to be

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Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
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O'Fallon, IL, USA


0 posted 07-15-99 12:18 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

He can turn my frowns
into great big smiles.
He can make my heart
do flips.
He is everything that I
want in a man.
But he has someone!
He is my sunshine
when I'm sad.
He is my laughter
when I'm mad.
He has the smile that
makes me swoon.
He has the eyes that
gleam like the moon.
But he has someone!
He tells me I'm pretty.
He tells me I'm fun.
He tells me how great I am
what a great person I am.
But he has someone!
He makes me think
that I deserve the world.
He makes me believe
I can have the moon & stars.
He makes me think that
that someone should be me!
He makes me wonder
what life would be like together.

*******Augchic711*******
He makes me want
to be with him.
He made me respect him
for all that he's done.
He made me love him for
the kindness he showed.
But he has someone!
He made me realize
how alike we are inside.
He made me want
to enjoy every minute.
He made me want him
to share it and be in it.
But he has someone!
He is everything to me.
He is everything that I want.
He is the perfect gentleman.
He is kind to me.
He is funny to cheer me up.
He treats me like a queen.
But he has someone!

He makes me want
to be that someone.
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Gentle Soul
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since 07-12-99
Posts 274
Vinton,Ohio USA


1 posted 07-15-99 12:34 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

wow.. sounds like a great guy.. and sounds like your love sick.. hehe..

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Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


2 posted 07-15-99 02:35 PM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

I am pretty love sick gentle soul you can read it in almost every poem i write thanx for reading mine

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azblond
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since 07-01-99
Posts 651
The Steamy Desert


3 posted 07-15-99 02:46 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Accept his friendship now and see
Someday "someone" may turn out to be
The very one he's speaking to
Dear Augchic, someday it might be you!


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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

wayoutwalt
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since 06-22-99
Posts 5106
TEXAS (it's all big)


4 posted 07-15-99 02:48 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

this is a poem to be proud of aug hope you find love soon that you can share with someone alone nice poem yes
jfreak
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since 06-17-99
Posts 311
Yuma, AZ, USA


5 posted 07-15-99 06:15 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Very nice poem Augchic. Just a little word of advice. If he knows he is doing this for you while he has someone then he probably isn't that great of a guy. If he is doing that then he is playing both you and that "someone". And if he is doing that do you really want to someday be that "someone"? Just some food for thought.

Jfreak
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


6 posted 07-16-99 12:16 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

thank you all for your kind words and jfreak you always give me food for thought keep it coming but to answer your question he has no idea that he does this for me he is my best-friend! but good luck to you all in life, love, and writing!

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Alwye
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since 06-16-99
Posts 3968
In the space between moments


7 posted 07-16-99 12:32 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Wonderful Augchic711. I can truly relate to this. I have been in the same sort of situation, but now he and I are going out. Wonderful job!

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*

Poet deVine
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since 05-26-99
Posts 25869
Hurricane Alley


8 posted 07-16-99 12:53 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I have to agree with jfreak....this guy sounds like he's playing off both you and his 'someone'...he shouldn't be making you feel like this if he's committed to someone else. What if you do get together someday and then you're his someone..will we see a poem posted by the next girl he flirts with? A word of caution...............
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
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O'Fallon, IL, USA


9 posted 07-30-99 02:55 AM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Thank you all for your words and poet for you words of wisdom I very much understand what you are saying. Thank you and I'm glad that you enjoyed my poems.

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Balladeer
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since 06-05-99
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA


10 posted 07-30-99 01:14 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Your sincerity always shows through, Augchic...an admirable trait. But, believe me, it's easy making someone "on the side" feel that way. The idea is to make your main someone feel that way!
Augchic711
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since 06-17-99
Posts 81
O'Fallon, IL, USA


11 posted 07-30-99 04:53 PM       View Profile for Augchic711   Email Augchic711   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Augchic711

Thanks for the compliment Balladeer and I do agree with you it's easy for some to say not to let him get to me but everyone always says that you fall in love with your friends and I truly believe that friendship is stronger in the long run. So thanx everyone for your opinions.

*******Augchic711*******
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