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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-14-99 09:46 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Though I love a few others, and others love me, each holding a piece of my heart, don't you see, I loved you from the start. You complete me, no need to compete.

I've wandered in Darkness a lonely embittered soul, lost in the delight of being free. I never knew you were there, the half that makes me whole. You complete me.

I hear your voice amongst the Heavenly throng, a triumphant song, meant to inspire and delight. I nearly returned to the night where I thought you would never see that
You complete me.

From the pedestal you stand upon, you saw my plight. Then reaching into the Pit, you drew me from it to place me at your side. I can no longer hide the giddiness inside.
You complete me.

While I was crying for the death of the child lost inside my mind, with random rhyme keeping time, I despaired of anyone loving me. I still don't trust the kind of Light that you give so freely.
You complete me.

You are the one for whom I've paid all my dues. Every niggling bit of pain, each person that spit, every giggling girl laughing at my fall into the Pit, was just my due for until I met you, I embraced misery.
You certainly do
Complete me.


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leelew
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1 posted 07-14-99 10:21 PM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

So beautiful.Inside your dark soul live the light and occasionally you let it shine through.
Moonlight
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2 posted 07-14-99 10:55 PM       View Profile for Moonlight   Email Moonlight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonlight's Home Page   View IP for Moonlight

This is a really beautiful poem. I like it a lot. I think it shows you are softening up a little bit more and more Its still a little sad though... but very nice


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DreamEvil
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3 posted 07-14-99 11:16 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Shucks folks, thank you both. The encouragement I get here helps alot.
Gentle Soul
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4 posted 07-14-99 11:21 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

I love it Dream... you are such a passionate person.. an inspiration to me..
Truly you have HELPED me turn my life around.. better? hehe

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Wilsonlee
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5 posted 07-14-99 11:33 PM       View Profile for Wilsonlee   Email Wilsonlee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wilsonlee

I am but a new poet registered in netpoet
Tis is the first poem i've read and i find it beautiful. Touching... someone every lovelorn person can relate to.
I know i have a lot more to learn from everyone of you.

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Willy the lovelorn poet
~one voice~
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6 posted 07-15-99 12:43 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

As I sit here wiping the tears from my eyes, I find it hard to type, I can hardly see. Is it really possible that someone out there loves me just this way? Leelew said it, love, sometimes you let that Light shine through. And when you do, you embrace the hearts of heaven.

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

DreamEvil
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7 posted 07-15-99 12:49 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Just for you, one voice, just for you.
dimples22
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8 posted 07-15-99 03:00 PM       View Profile for dimples22   Email dimples22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dimples22

I think you should continue to write, I like your poem and found it moving and expressive.
DreamEvil
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9 posted 07-15-99 04:55 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you, do you live up to your name?
Ominous
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10 posted 07-16-99 01:52 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Something felt by all at one time.
Very touching Dream.
DreamEvil
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11 posted 07-16-99 02:45 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

ac
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12 posted 07-16-99 09:25 AM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

-sigh-...reminds me of that one who is longer here but i know is watching from heaven still a part of me...
DreamEvil
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13 posted 07-16-99 10:04 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you.
~one voice~
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14 posted 07-16-99 01:12 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I just have to read this every time I come here... I love this poem so much!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

DreamEvil
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15 posted 07-16-99 02:10 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Perhaps the best compliment any of us could receive, coming from you, I know it is the best I CAN receive. There's no opinion I value more.
Sweet T
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16 posted 07-16-99 02:27 PM       View Profile for Sweet T   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sweet T

This was a very moving poem.
It is really nice to know that someone will be there through it all and still have much love for you. I seriously hope that I too find this person someday. Until then....................
DreamEvil
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17 posted 07-16-99 11:33 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you, I appreciate the sentiment.
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