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Ladycat
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At the edge and a doorway,TX

0 posted 1999-07-14 06:15 PM


Love comes and looses sight
Left in desolate mountain tops
Buried in Korean winters passed
Loneliness
Calls awaiting voices
On the other end a silent phone line
Voices waiting for help
Looking for another lonely voice in the wilderness of life
The waiting to be followed by echos of empty words
Undertones only waiting for the other end of the line to go dead
Both waiting for the affectionate "I Love You, Goodbye..."
Understanding
Joyful at the thoughts of love
Silence flows through our heads
We wait for our lovers to write or call
Maybe this time they'll even come home
We learn to understand that this is how life is
Always waiting
Never getting
I guess that this will all have to wait
For another day


Long distance relationships can work if two people are strong enough...

Love,
Lady

"Sometimes the wolves are silent and only the moon howls."
-George Carlin
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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.




[This message has been edited by Ladycat (edited 07-14-99).]

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1 posted 1999-07-14 08:55 PM


My sentiments exactly! You have found that waiting is the hardest part.
Ladycat
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2 posted 1999-07-15 11:19 AM


I'm glad that someone understands..

Love,
Lady

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