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Dragon
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0 posted 07-14-99 03:58 PM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dragon





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jfreak
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1 posted 07-15-99 05:56 PM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

I must say that the poem is well written and I like the use of repitition with darkness. You are talented. Yet if you truly feel this way then I must say you are one mistaken wretch. Being alone is never good. We need others in our lives, close to us. Those are the people that test our character or instill it in us. I feel sorry for you if you truly feel this way b/c there is no positives with being alone.

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Dragon
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2 posted 07-16-99 09:53 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

Thank-You.This is my first attempt at writing.And this is what I was feeling at the time.But this too shall pass.Painful.
wayoutwalt
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3 posted 07-16-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

i like this poem too tells of the inner soul of dragon i too agree darkness is bad but i like you say this too shall pass..let your heart be an open book dragon thank you
Dragon
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4 posted 07-16-99 08:21 PM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

THis Dragon is just find it has a soul.old and tarnished but there still the same.THanks
Dragon
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5 posted 07-23-99 11:50 AM       View Profile for Dragon   Email Dragon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dragon

I have deleted this poem
 
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