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justin
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since 1999-07-13
Posts 7
Pittsburgh, PA USA

0 posted 1999-07-14 11:01 AM


God, let it, please
through my veins
oh, everything, everything
every note
every breath
of second-hand pot
every
drunken stoned college
chick with a beer
or a blunt
in hand
with a flighty eye
and a careless laugh
and shiny legs to dance
my sweet
intoxication

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Augchic711
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since 1999-06-17
Posts 80
O'Fallon, IL, USA
1 posted 1999-07-30 02:19 AM


Justin~
I must say this poem is good with the imagery! I'm glad you chose to show it with us, thanx.

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