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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
You drown me with your pale blue eyes. Their powerful gaze puts me in to a daze, and it's only hours before I realize that it's you, the simple truth, who, like none other, can hear my cries from oh, so far, far away... You melt me with you careful words. Their emotion stirs my devotion to you- so true- swings me in to centrifugal motion, swirling, swaying, inside your ocean 'Til I can no longer tell night from day. You seduce me in my vivid dreams. Moving me, Loving me, so endlessly... 'Tis you- My Angel in Blue... The One that completes me... The One that wards all my pain far away. ©~onevoice~ ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* [This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 07-14-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I cannot descibe the feelings raging inside my twisted mind at the thought that this could be about me. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Better believe it baby!  ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
its beautiful put smile on the face of a man who has had to many chips ohoy this morning ohhh heartburn great poem |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Oh to have such eyes. To bad mine are hazel. I liked the flow... a very beautiful piece. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful, one voice. I sure have felt like this. Wonderful piece. ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you so much, all of you! ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, one voice. My eyes are blue. Do I count? |
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megatech Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 10North Aurora, IL USA |
This is so perfect. Would you mind terribly, if I were to read this to my girlfriend tonight? I promise I won't tell her I wrote it... tempted though I may be. But, it is so perfect. Thank you for this. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Yes, go read it to your girlfriend! Better not tell her you wrote it though! lol It makes me feel good to know that I struck some chords in my fellow bards! Thank YOU for your praise and support! ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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megatech Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 10North Aurora, IL USA |
By the way, my girlfriend loved it, too. She cried. And, no, I did not tell her I wrote it, either. Walk peacefully, one voice. Carry the wind with you. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
It is staggering, the thought that you wrote this for me. Fairest flower, though every hour finds me closer to you inside. I can't abide the times I cry without you by my side. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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