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~one voice~
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0 posted 07-14-99 06:30 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

You drown me with your pale blue eyes.
Their powerful gaze puts me in to a daze,
and it's only hours before I realize
that it's you,
the simple truth,
who, like none other, can hear my cries
from oh, so far, far away...

You melt me with you careful words.
Their emotion stirs my devotion
to you-
so true-
swings me in to centrifugal motion,
swirling, swaying, inside your ocean
'Til I can no longer tell night from day.

You seduce me in my vivid dreams.
Moving me, Loving me, so endlessly...
'Tis you-
My Angel in Blue...
The One that completes me...
The One that wards all my pain far away.

©~onevoice~

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*



[This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 07-14-99).]
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-14-99 06:34 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I cannot descibe the feelings raging inside my twisted mind at the thought that this could be about me.

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.
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~one voice~
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2 posted 07-14-99 06:37 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Better believe it baby!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


3 posted 07-14-99 12:58 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

its beautiful put smile on the face of a man who has had to many chips ohoy this morning ohhh heartburn great poem
Andrew Scott
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4 posted 07-14-99 01:49 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Oh to have such eyes. To bad mine are hazel. I liked the flow... a very beautiful piece.
Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 07-14-99 01:57 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

So beautiful, one voice. I sure have felt like this. Wonderful piece.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


*Krista Knutson*

~one voice~
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6 posted 07-14-99 08:29 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you so much, all of you!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

Balladeer
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7 posted 07-14-99 08:32 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Hey, one voice. My eyes are blue. Do I count?
megatech
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8 posted 07-14-99 11:19 PM       View Profile for megatech   Email megatech   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for megatech

This is so perfect. Would you mind terribly, if I were to read this to my girlfriend tonight?

I promise I won't tell her I wrote it... tempted though I may be. But, it is so perfect. Thank you for this.
~one voice~
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9 posted 07-15-99 12:46 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Yes, go read it to your girlfriend! Better not tell her you wrote it though! lol It makes me feel good to know that I struck some chords in my fellow bards! Thank YOU for your praise and support!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

megatech
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10 posted 07-16-99 12:12 AM       View Profile for megatech   Email megatech   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for megatech

By the way, my girlfriend loved it, too. She cried. And, no, I did not tell her I wrote it, either.

Walk peacefully, one voice. Carry the wind with you.
DreamEvil
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11 posted 07-16-99 02:12 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

It is staggering, the thought that you wrote this for me.

Fairest flower, though every hour finds me closer to you inside. I can't abide the times I cry without you by my side.

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I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say.
DreamEvil©


 
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