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My Lost Love |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Am I that complex? that no one knows, not even I? and only God above knows all about why? why I am who I am, and I do what I do I do not know myself, that much is true I think I know myself, for just a second, and yet I am wrong one minute Im in love and to sing my love a song next minute I do not and couldnt believe I did, Oh, Where is my love, He has the key! he must be hid God PLEASE send him soon theres a large hole a hole in my heart, one key fits, I know in my soul who he is,, what he is, how he is I know him well but only one fits, Oh, where is he? my heart doth swell Sometimes I am so lonely, I cry and feel alone, no one to love no one to call my own, so I pray to God above Oh God give my love his key. the one that fits so good into my heart, soul, and mind like my love should I feel so picky, do I not have the right? I mean.. I need to find the one I shall keep for life I have hurt a few in my spastic hunt I didn’t mean to, but I got to find the one I want God, Im sick of lookin, I guess that’s why Why I have come so close to throwing my heart at anyone by So I give thee my heart, for you know who, You don’t even have to seek, all you say is “YOU” Im getting impatient God, Oh how I long I long to look in my love’s eyes to see pure strong Strength in Christ, strength in body, strength in love One whom I can trust, and tell everything above Can I not be understood? I doubt it, its not easy For I don’t even sometimes know me! But my love will know.. how how great that will be To have someone who knows every corner of me! But I guess I will wait cuz it is my whole life Cant act in haste, or Id lie in strife So I will tarry, and be the way I am ‘Til I find the one I will marry ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Great job, Gentle Soul!! Moving and stirring. I knew you could do it. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
thank you Dream.. couldnt have done it without you! You were my inspiration to get back into poetry.. [This message has been edited by Gentle Soul (edited 07-14-99).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
great form and style yuh yuh |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
i know how you feel, yet: we all wish for the perfect love, or at least a small token...but if you truly "love thy self" your heart will never be broken ------------------ Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...serving wench... stolen hours...devotion...Master |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I certainly can relate to this.... this is a lovely poem, Gentle Soul. ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
Thank you.. its one of my older ones.. but I give God the glory, and Dream the credit.. he says it was I who did it all.. but he pushed me and gave me confidence, and it was his idea, he even gave me my pen name Thank you DreamEvil ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Talia Junior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 25Colorado Springs, CO, USA |
You could not have described me to a truer note. Thank you for posting. I love reading your work. |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
thank you.. we must have smiliarities, cuz this is none other than my own feelings..  |
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