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My Lost Love

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Gentle Soul
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0 posted 07-14-99 02:14 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gentle Soul

Am I that complex? that no one knows, not even I?
and only God above knows all about why?
why I am who I am, and I do what I do
I do not know myself, that much is true

I think I know myself, for just a second, and yet I am wrong
one minute Im in love and to sing my love a song
next minute I do not and couldnt believe I did,
Oh, Where is my love, He has the key! he must be hid

God PLEASE send him soon theres a large hole
a hole in my heart, one key fits, I know in my soul
who he is,, what he is, how he is I know him well
but only one fits, Oh, where is he? my heart doth swell

Sometimes I am so lonely, I cry and feel alone, no one to love
no one to call my own, so I pray to God above
Oh God give my love his key. the one that fits so good
into my heart, soul, and mind like my love should


I feel so picky, do I not have the right?
I mean.. I need to find the one I shall keep for life
I have hurt a few in my spastic hunt
I didnt mean to, but I got to find the one I want

God, Im sick of lookin, I guess thats why
Why I have come so close to throwing my heart at anyone by
So I give thee my heart, for you know who,
You dont even have to seek, all you say is YOU

Im getting impatient God, Oh how I long
I long to look in my loves eyes to see pure strong
Strength in Christ, strength in body, strength in love
One whom I can trust, and tell everything above

Can I not be understood? I doubt it, its not easy
For I dont even sometimes know me!
But my love will know.. how how great that will be
To have someone who knows every corner of me!

But I guess I will wait cuz it is my whole life
Cant act in haste, or Id lie in strife
So I will tarry, and be the way I am
Til I find the one I will marry


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Gnt뤧


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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-14-99 02:18 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Great job, Gentle Soul!! Moving and stirring. I knew you could do it.

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Gentle Soul
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2 posted 07-14-99 02:20 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

thank you Dream.. couldnt have done it without you! You were my inspiration to get back into poetry..

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wayoutwalt
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3 posted 07-14-99 02:22 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

great form and style yuh yuh
elvira
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4 posted 07-14-99 02:43 AM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i know how you feel, yet: we all wish for the perfect love, or at least a small token...but if you truly "love thy self" your heart will never be broken


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Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...serving wench...
stolen hours...devotion...Master

Alwye
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In the space between moments


5 posted 07-14-99 02:49 AM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I certainly can relate to this.... this is a lovely poem, Gentle Soul.

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson


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Gentle Soul
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6 posted 07-14-99 03:01 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

Thank you.. its one of my older ones.. but I give God the glory, and Dream the credit.. he says it was I who did it all.. but he pushed me and gave me confidence, and it was his idea, he even gave me my pen name
Thank you DreamEvil

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Gnt뤧


Talia
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7 posted 07-14-99 11:31 AM       View Profile for Talia   Email Talia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Talia

You could not have described me to a truer note. Thank you for posting. I love reading your work.
Gentle Soul
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8 posted 07-14-99 11:36 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

thank you.. we must have smiliarities, cuz this is none other than my own feelings..
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