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megatech
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since 1999-07-14
Posts 10
North Aurora, IL USA

0 posted 1999-07-14 01:21 AM


Face soft and still,
she sits afore me.
Hair draped down
cuddles her shoulder,
a smile painted tenderly
across her face.
Layers of color
brushed over linen
reveal her eyes.
To remember her,
with both love and
all her pain,
this paint will
be forever her.

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If there is any one thing you do well, make it life.

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mia
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 118

1 posted 1999-07-14 07:49 AM


this piece was beautiful...thank you for sharing megatech... Hope to read more soon.

mia

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2 posted 1999-07-14 09:19 AM


It reminds me of a piece called paint brush.. I love your piece.. Lots of feeling.. Welcome! I hope to see more work from you soon..

Love,
Lady

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Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured.



megatech
Junior Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 10
North Aurora, IL USA
3 posted 1999-07-14 10:59 PM


Thank you so much for your kind words. This place is a haven of wonders for the poet. I must say that I love all the fine poetry I have seen here. And the interaction with others is wonderful. Thank you for letting me be a part of it.
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