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megatech
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The candle flickers.
The walls recede
momentarily,
but soon return.
Outside, the rain slowly
washes away the night.
Our moment, lost in time,
bears the bittersweetness,
memory.

When the day is past,
and the night is gone,
beyond a day for you or I,
our moment will be ash.
And the rain will wash us
from the night.
© Copyright 1999 megatech - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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1 posted 07-14-99 02:10 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I really enjoyed this piece of work! It made me feel as if this particular memory was part of me. Thank you for sharing!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

megatech
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2 posted 07-14-99 11:03 PM       View Profile for megatech   Email megatech   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for megatech

Thank you so much one voice.

Love be with you.

-R
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