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Open Poetry #1

Memory

megatech
Junior Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 10
North Aurora, IL USA

0 posted 1999-07-14 12:54 PM

The candle flickers.
The walls recede
momentarily,
but soon return.
Outside, the rain slowly
washes away the night.
Our moment, lost in time,
bears the bittersweetness,
memory.

When the day is past,
and the night is gone,
beyond a day for you or I,
our moment will be ash.
And the rain will wash us
from the night.

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

1 posted 1999-07-14 02:10 AM

I really enjoyed this piece of work! It made me feel as if this particular memory was part of me. Thank you for sharing!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

megatech
Junior Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 10
North Aurora, IL USA

2 posted 1999-07-14 11:03 PM

Thank you so much one voice.

Love be with you.

-R

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