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blueloon
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0 posted 07-13-99 07:57 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for blueloon

Strong...It is the first words that comes to mind when I think of them.
Beautiful and strong...
Much like yourself you know?
Maybe you don't...but when I think of you
I think of them.
Perfectly graceful...
Producing the beauty of your mind.
Staegically you create...
I've studied the way you do so.
You may not see me, but I do.
With much wonder I observe you as they constantly move...
unconscience of your rythm...
caressing everything you touch...
undressing all that you encounter.
Your passion is ignited...
cause your hands you see...
are your soul communicating all over me.
© Copyright 1999 blueloon - All Rights Reserved
Andrew Scott
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1 posted 07-13-99 08:07 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Great perspective! I'll never look at my keyboard the same way.
blueloon
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NY


2 posted 07-13-99 08:31 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

After your feedback I will never look at my keyboard the same either. Thank you Andrew for your kind words I am new at this and it means a lot!

blueloon
poetFemmeFatale
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3 posted 07-27-99 10:00 AM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

My Gawd ! After reading this I had to get intimate with my keyboard too - AND had to take a cold shower!! If this were any more erotic, I'm afraid my hard drive would have started smoking...! LOL This definately deserves to go back to the top!!

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"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

poetFemmeFatale
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4 posted 08-14-99 11:59 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

I'm sorry blueloon, but this piece of yours absolutely fascinates me, I can't believe you didn't get more response!! I insist it goes back to the top, all the way from page 28 or so! ~~dusting it off carefully~~

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

thursdayschild
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5 posted 08-16-99 12:35 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

I loved this poem! Great work blueloon, thanks for sharing it.
Sue
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since 08-04-99
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6 posted 08-16-99 02:45 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

Love it!
blueloon
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7 posted 08-17-99 09:21 PM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

Thank you Poet for being so kind. I appreciate all your kind words at any time. I wish I could have replied sooner but I was out of town. Thanks again to 'child and Sue.
Blueloon
 
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