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For anyone who lost love

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Cynthia
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0 posted 07-13-99 07:43 PM       View Profile for Cynthia   Email Cynthia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cynthia

I thought that I had it all
You care, your feelings, your love
Now that you've gone
I realized something about the day
That you took your love away

You told me that we would be together forever
You told me that noone would ever enter your heart
Well I learned it was all a lie on the day
That you took your love away

My heart broke and now it aches
You told me that yould never happen
You told me that you would never break
my heart or make me cry
Well you did it all on the day
That you took your love away

I thought that we were meant to be
as did everyone else
Maybe it was the girls, maybe it was the distance
But I know something was wrong on that day
That you took your love away.

September 28, 1998
© Copyright 1999 Cynthia - All Rights Reserved
Princess Lily
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1 posted 07-14-99 01:17 AM       View Profile for Princess Lily   Email Princess Lily   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Princess Lily

Wonderful!
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we see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

[This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-14-99).]

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2 posted 07-14-99 01:21 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Tragic, I like it.

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