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Masked Intruder
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Near golden sunsets

0 posted 1999-07-13 02:19 PM


The first second I laid my eyes on you,
I knew you were the one.
The second week you were my friend,
I thought forever had begun.
The last minute was but too late,
To say my heart was true.
Now you're gone, and I'm alone,
With only memories of you.

© Copyright 1999 Philip Zemler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-07-14 09:52 AM


I liked this one. Sweet and simple.

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2 posted 1999-07-14 01:47 PM


Fleeting

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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true.
KRJ


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3 posted 1999-07-14 02:06 PM


poignant i think i always use the word but never look it up yuh love it tho
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