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invertigo18 Member
since 1999-06-14
Posts 53Prairieville, LA., USA |
Whispering Eyes I felt for so long Like I was talking to the wind Was I wrong? Was it pretend? Hope of a new dawn From rays of your love That must be there In the air above Entranced and held up By your’ whispering eyes. That, tell everything Your mind derives. Is it a dream? Could it be true? Could it be? That finally you… Could rip the velvet night in two With the touch of a love Coughed from the heart Of a shadowmind dove Inflamed and burned up By your whispering eyes That tear up When your soul cries Cry for me A friend in need For your love My heart bleeds ------------------ Luke Cakalic |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
This phrase was my favorite: Could rip the velvet night in two your poem was beautiful.. keep up the good work... mia |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
I sometimes feel like you(or whoever was this happened to, whether it be real or fake) I will look forward to more of your work!  |
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Alain DeLaCendres Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119Ohio |
The eyes are things of wonder, no? And so is this poem invertigo. P.S. sorry, I didn't rhyme that on purpose.. ------------------ Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie. |
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