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Whispering Eyes

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invertigo18
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since 06-14-99
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0 posted 07-13-99 01:08 PM       View Profile for invertigo18   Email invertigo18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for invertigo18

Whispering Eyes

I felt for so long
Like I was talking to the wind
Was I wrong?
Was it pretend?

Hope of a new dawn
From rays of your love
That must be there
In the air above
Entranced and held up
By your’ whispering eyes.
That, tell everything
Your mind derives.

Is it a dream?
Could it be true?
Could it be?
That finally you…

Could rip the velvet night in two
With the touch of a love
Coughed from the heart
Of a shadowmind dove
Inflamed and burned up
By your whispering eyes
That tear up
When your soul cries

Cry for me
A friend in need
For your love
My heart bleeds


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mia
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since 07-06-99
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1 posted 07-13-99 01:25 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

This phrase was my favorite:

Could rip the velvet night in two

your poem was beautiful.. keep up the good work...

mia
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2 posted 07-13-99 01:29 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

I sometimes feel like you(or whoever was this happened to, whether it be real or fake) I will look forward to more of your work!

Alain DeLaCendres
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3 posted 07-13-99 08:14 PM       View Profile for Alain DeLaCendres   Email Alain DeLaCendres   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alain DeLaCendres

The eyes are things of wonder, no? And so is this poem invertigo.

P.S. sorry, I didn't rhyme that on purpose..

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