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Fuer eine Liebste

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justin
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0 posted 07-13-99 09:10 AM       View Profile for justin   Email justin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for justin

cast your shadows
half-lived on the walls
soak the lamplight
soak the candlelight
all into you
cast your shadows and
I'll hold them
if you like
they're insubstantial
dark and only
a fraction of you
but they can fill me

I overflow
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mia
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1 posted 07-13-99 01:37 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I loved it.

What does the title mean? Or can I ask?

Your words dance.

mia
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2 posted 07-13-99 01:40 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Love it!!! I can't wait till I can write like that! What does the title mean? I you will tell me. I will look forward to more of your work!



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~one voice~
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3 posted 07-13-99 01:47 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Oh how beautiful you make these words! I was left wanting more... Mia's right...your words do dance.

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*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

justin
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4 posted 07-13-99 11:29 PM       View Profile for justin   Email justin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for justin

To clarify, although it makes the poem lose a bit of its mystery, the title is German meaning roughly "For a Lover." But the noun Liebste in German is more of a pet name. Moreover, it's the pet name I use for my girlfriend. This poem is about her.
 
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