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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-13-99 06:02 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

No one has ever understood the depths of my rage, it's source is obscure, even to me. One man now has my darkness aligned against him, it's his turn in the cage.

I'll carve out his heart while he begs me to let him die, slice him into pieces only a sparrow could swallow. Make him regret making her feel so hollow.

I've found the hate at my center again, wait till my rage fills me and then, this glorious bloodlust will avenge where he's been as I spit in his face, her fall from grace.

I'm holding her battered heart in my hands, looking at the bruising and making my plans. He wont know what hit him as his sight goes dim.

He beat her I learned just tonight, what a terrible thing for her to endure, his pleasure doesn't make it right. Vengeance is mine, to be sure.

Hurt me all you want, hit , slash, burn, kill me if you must, but harm one I love and God help you, for that is all that can or will, from my bloodlust.

I'll string him up and subject him to the blows he railed upon her, how many times, only Heaven knows, then leave the worthless carcass to the Carrion Crows
And laugh as they peck out his eyes
With his final sighs.


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~one voice~
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1 posted 07-13-99 06:06 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

To be protected by you makes you my knight in shining armour...strolling in on your white horse, rescuing me, the damzal in distress...and fighting off the monters that come my way. Thank you.

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-13-99 06:10 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

A Knight in blood-drenched armor crafted of shining night, I would be a terrible sight
to behold.
leelew
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3 posted 07-13-99 10:14 AM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

If I were to every need avenging you are the one I'd call. My Dark angel to the rescue! Truly beautiful!
azblond
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4 posted 07-13-99 02:13 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Dream...it is with hope of someone like you existing that helps us make it through.

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

DreamEvil
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5 posted 07-13-99 05:53 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

As I said, you are fast adding to my short list.
Balladeer
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6 posted 07-14-99 01:12 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Vengeance is good. Too many people get away with their actions and never have to pay. It's exhilarating to know that that there are those, such as yourself, out there who feel the way you do. You are misplaced in time, my friend.
tori
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7 posted 07-14-99 02:01 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

A Knight in armor came, to avenge the Lady's name
To take vengeance upon his mighty sword, honor be his just reward
So few share the right to stand a noble Knight
A Gallant man will stand to fight, `tis in his honor, justice is tonight

Lord I wish I was in distress.....lol :-)
Great work DE......
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If with pen in hand I've made you think
Then I've not wasted one drop of ink
Vlh.

DreamEvil
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8 posted 07-14-99 09:17 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Opinions from two I respect, right in a row!!

Thanks, Respected Elder, you are right about me being born out of my time.

Tori,
What more can I say?
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