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The Bridge- for Gentle Soul

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DreamEvil
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0 posted 07-13-99 04:39 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

She stood firmly on the side of light, afraid of what quick glimpse she could see of the mystery shrouded in the gloaming of the ever roaming endless night.

From the wall of roiling black, a tendril of glittering mist reached across the rippling divide. Try as she might, she couldn't stop her delight as it reached deep inside.

Coaxing her along with it's potent siren song, Evil laid hold of her soul, It's only goal the subjugation of her right to be free of the shackles of guilt and misery.

It slowly, cajoling as it went, lowered her into the Pit, worse it made her enjoy every minute of it. Listening to the wisdom of the Evil night began to steal Heaven from her sight.

From the dregs of iniquity, I see her downward slide, moving me to pity. When before I counted each woman a whore, she made me see, rocked me to the core.

From the depths of this intimate abyss, I reached forth to support before she accepted Evil's kiss, a bridge for her stand upon and ponder whatever made her wander.

Seeing the gleaming of my hellish eyes, she asked me why I would help her to the other side. Evil being my due. With a glance at her thighs, I made an oath I will never rue: I will always support you.

You are my bridge she said. One who helps me to cross over, not a beast or wanton lover. Should I turn around, you wont let me down, only help me on my way.

That is what I've become, a bridge to the young, between the Darkness and Light, try as I might to rail against the light, somehow you see, it became a part of me.

©1999 DreamEvil


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~one voice~
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1 posted 07-13-99 04:43 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Spectacular! This verse says so much! GentleSoul, you are very blessed to have the support of dear, DreamEvil!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-13-99 04:47 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I hope she likes it, she moved me as few do, just like you.
leelew
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3 posted 07-13-99 10:23 AM       View Profile for leelew   Email leelew   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit leelew's Home Page   View IP for leelew

When Darkness touches light who are we to argue which is right!May she be able to see herself through your eyes!
Gentle Soul
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4 posted 07-13-99 12:30 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

Thank you DreamEvil... you are one of my best friends.. even as far as real life friends go... *big tears in my eyes* you take the words right out of my mind and put them on words.. how you do it.. I dont know.. but thank you.. you could never know how much it means to me... I am not even sure if I know how much.. your a sweetie!

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azblond
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5 posted 07-13-99 01:43 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Dream...This piece is so beautiful and touching. Gentle Soul is lucky indeed to have such special words written so wonderfully for her. This one moved me...

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
Gentle Soul
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6 posted 07-13-99 05:05 PM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

DreamEvil.. I have the poem that you asked me to do.. but b4 I post it here.. I want you to read it..

and I thank God He sent you to me.. you have helped me out of alot of things..
DreamEvil
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7 posted 07-13-99 05:51 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I will dear, as soon as I get back from work. I'm glad you like it. Azblond, love you as well. You're fast ending up on my short list.
Ominous
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8 posted 07-16-99 02:08 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Such a beautiful piece,
you have so much to share. I am so glad that I have the opportunity to know you.
DreamEvil
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9 posted 07-16-99 02:47 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

And I you, Ominous.
Balladeer
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10 posted 07-16-99 03:34 AM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

The two of you compliment each other perfectly....and I compliment you both.
DreamEvil
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11 posted 07-16-99 09:06 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Again, my prolific friend, I thank you.
lenny
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12 posted 07-16-99 09:23 AM       View Profile for lenny   Email lenny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lenny

The darkness in a room is immediately and thouroughly evicted with the simple lighting of a light bulb. There has never been, however, a dark bulb that could subdue the light. So with us.
DreamEvil
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13 posted 07-16-99 10:01 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Light needs a source, extinguish it, and the Dark returns.
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