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grandiloquent
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0 posted 07-12-99 08:37 PM       View Profile for grandiloquent   Email grandiloquent   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit grandiloquent's Home Page   View IP for grandiloquent

This tight, small feeling
~ happiness tied ~
letting them
{words, someone elseís visions}
strip me in ways
where I decide I like this Ė the rhythm,
the directive,
his spectacle of words.
I decide, again, he has talent.
Much more than me
(contemplate: jealousy bursts,
simmers,
pretends to disappear)
A few lines catch me with
little tingling hooks
my anonymous emotion
like a crush for inanimate objects
-- a beautiful womanís skin -- my bedroom
-- these fantastic poems Iím reading -- a snap from perspective
all summed from this delight-sided knot in my chest
-- like anxiety having an orgasm.


[This message has been edited by grandiloquent (edited 07-25-99).]
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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


1 posted 07-13-99 05:29 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Sounds like you've been reading so much of everyone else's work, you're lost for words.

Cute.

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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true.
KRJ

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i think the thoughts here are too jumbled. i found myself having to go back and reread what i just read, trying to make sense of it.
 
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