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tori
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


0 posted 07-12-99 04:04 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

To you my love, this rose I give
For your love, it is I live
You fill ever corner of my heart
Left is not one lonely part
In search of love I go no more
It is you my love that I adore
Your beauty is a work of art
Your inner self beyond compare
Yes its you my love that takes me where
No words nor wine or music sweet
Has ever made me feel complete
As you have done, my lovely sweet
If only I could tell you so
Then forward, our lives could go
A rush of feelings over come, breathless, shaking, feeling numb
Then life on earth would be as such
That Heavens Kingdom I could touch
To you my love this rose I give, in hopes of one day we may live
In ageless, endless, passing time, together with our hearts entwined
But for now I'll go on passing by, talking, smiling, being shy
If you look up and see me here
I hope you know, it is I my dear
That loves you more then words can say
If you hear my heart beat racing wild, just touch my hand or give a smile
One day I know our love will be, a love for all eternity
For now I give you this sweet rose
And dream of the day to come
You and I my love,
shall be one.

@~}~~

tori 87
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If with pen in hand I have made you think
Then I've wasted not, one drop of ink

[This message has been edited by tori (edited 07-12-99).]
© Copyright 1999 Victoria Hosier/tori - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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1 posted 07-12-99 05:29 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Tori, this is a wonderful piece of work. I love it! It fills one with a warm, loving feeling! Thanks for posting and sharing!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
tori
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2 posted 07-12-99 09:25 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thanks for the kind words......
DreamEvil
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3 posted 07-12-99 09:56 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Wonderful verse, I'm not one for the romantics, well, lately I am. Very good work!

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tori
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4 posted 07-13-99 09:12 AM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Thank you DreamE.
I too like the darker side..
 
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