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Sunshine
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I have a list of wuzzes that I was supposed to do
And on the other side a list of Dids Ive done.
Sometimes the wuzzes outdo the dids
And to this plea now Ive come.

Lord help me with my wuzzes, for they are a whole list long:
I was to help my grandma, I was to sing a song
I was to kiss my husband, I was to hug my kid
Only two on this list are the ones I did.

Lord help me with my wuzzes, they are growing great
I was to pray to you before now; I was to fix a gate
I was to see a friend, I was to learn how to relate
I was to go on a camping trip with my handsome mate.

I was to write a letter; I was to pull the weeds;
I was to write a poem, I was to see to my needs;
I was to get a mammogram, oh Lord hear my plea
How can I get these to my list of dids before I fall to my knees?

I was to do the dishes, I was to wash the dog
I was to get the car lubed, and to remove the kitchen clog
I was to bake a cake, and get the cookies done
I was to do these things before the setting sun.

I was to remember my childhood
so my children I would raise right
all I did was turn around
and my children were adults overnight.

I was to set a course for me
A course so straight and true
And now all I have is me
Standing here with my wuzzes before you.

For all of the things Ive done did,
and with the wuzzes left to do
Lord smile upon me, this woman here,
For Im sure my list is shorter, than the list you did for you.


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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true.
KRJ

© Copyright 1999 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-12-99 05:53 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This poem is wuzzerful!
Sunshine
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2 posted 07-12-99 07:06 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

The greatest compliment...from Balladeer. It was fun...and I'm sure sure I didn't list all the wuzzes that ever wuz.

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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true.
KRJ

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Balladeer - I need your input on a few others done today. See earlier postings. Enjoy. Thanks!
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Sunshine

Words will always express our feelings true.
KRJ



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4 posted 07-12-99 08:28 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

I have pages of wuzzes, and I am only 13!!! I understand u completely. Nicly done! Great job!

fjones
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5 posted 07-13-99 08:45 AM       View Profile for fjones   Email fjones   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fjones

I enjoyed reading the poem. It is cute but still has a lot of meaning .

[This message has been edited by fjones (edited 07-13-99).]
Sadelite
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6 posted 03-22-2004 02:38 PM       View Profile for Sadelite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sadelite

Thank you, Sunshine,

    What a nice gift to send.  This is me all over!  There is wisdom hidden in this.
                 Sadie
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7 posted 03-22-2004 02:43 PM       View Profile for Sadelite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sadelite

Forgot my library card the first time.  OK. Now I have it.   Thanks!
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