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mia
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since 1999-07-06
Posts 118


0 posted 1999-07-12 02:04 PM


i am letting you slip,
run like ocean water
between my frozen fingers
you fall to the ground
and the earth
absorbs your wetness,
i dig my fingers
into your chest
to fertilize the soil
that is your heart.
You breathe.
You can't stop breathing
and i linger
for i know that this moment,
like all others,
will pass.
Alone
i will be left
to remember the day
i let you go
because i loved you
too damn much

© Copyright 1999 mia - All Rights Reserved
Alain DeLaCendres
Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119
Ohio
1 posted 1999-07-12 02:33 PM


Tres ironique mon amie. Tres beau aussi. Le poeme est tres pittoresque et plein de aigre-doux verite. Je comprend.

please forgive the lack of accent marks, etc...Au revoir..

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Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie.

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