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for all the naked people in this world

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mia
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0 posted 07-12-99 12:58 PM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for mia

i closed my eyes last night
forgot love
forgot pain
but remembered to take off my shoes,
walked to the edge of the world
in the wetness of the grass
that grows behind my white house
in front of the ocean
i wished my life last night
forgot love
forgot pain
but remembered
to undo my pants
took those off too...
danced in the rain
that tinted my tears
that burnt my face
in front of the ocean
i caught a firefly last night
forgot love
forgot pain
but remembered
to slip out of my shirt
rolled in the dirt
between the cucumbers
that grow in my garden
in front of the ocean
i inhaled smoke last night
forgot love
forgot pain
but remembered
to unhook my bra
and slide off my panties
screamed at the moon
that was laughing at my body
and ran naked
all the way home
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For all the naked people in this world.Walk naked in your backyard at least once in your life.



[This message has been edited by mia (edited 07-12-99).]
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elvira
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1 posted 07-12-99 03:45 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

i am a nudist...but only indoors!


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i never call a poem "nice" or such,
for that would not be saying much

Balladeer
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2 posted 07-12-99 06:05 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This poem is so RIGHT. Such a wonderful feeling it describes, one which I'm sure too few people know but should experience. I wish we were neighbors.
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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3 posted 07-12-99 06:19 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

If only everyone had the chance for this experience! It's such a beautiful image! I look forward to reading more of your work!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*


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Sundance
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4 posted 07-12-99 07:04 PM       View Profile for Sundance   Email Sundance   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sundance

Wish we lived next door, then we could run wild together! I least I know there are some people in the world that still believe in nuedity!
grandiloquent
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5 posted 07-12-99 08:32 PM       View Profile for grandiloquent   Email grandiloquent   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit grandiloquent's Home Page   View IP for grandiloquent

Lovely.
Daniel2
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Waterloo, Ontario, Canada


6 posted 07-13-99 08:58 AM       View Profile for Daniel2   Email Daniel2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniel2

Personally, I'm glad we aren't neighbours (at least I don't think we are). With this poem you have crossed the boundary from proper to improper in an interesting way. Makes me remember when I ran naked in a park in Vancouver, a long time ago. Maybe I can get a poem out of that. Thanks.
mia
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7 posted 07-13-99 09:20 AM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

Well you know what daniel2... after checking your profile... we could easily be neibours...Sorry to disapoint you but take comfort in the fact that I am very comfortable with my body but I have not yet become an exhibitionniste!!! Thanks for the comments... It was written as a sort of metaphore...not only as the nakedness of the body but of the soul also...

I remember a naked guy that ran in a Park in Vancover... kidding!!!

mia
 
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