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My next Submission.....

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Newguy
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since 06-27-99
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Moultrie, GA, USA


0 posted 07-12-99 10:46 AM       View Profile for Newguy   Email Newguy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Newguy

Visions

I had a vision of the past
What did I see?
Mistakes, pain, regret
But like the knife that shears
the skin for treatment,
I saw it's help, its good.

I saw a vision of the present
What did I see?
A lonely soul caught in a world
of chaotic upheaval.
I see a floursecent star in a dark sky.

I saw a vision of the future
What did I see?
A bird of peace, challenging
the hurricane of corruptness.
I see a casualty of war.
© Copyright 1999 Newguy - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
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Billings, MT USA


1 posted 07-12-99 10:48 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

I like this Newguy! It's deep... Keep up the good work!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
DreamEvil
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2 posted 07-12-99 10:59 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Nice work!!

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wayoutwalt
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i think i get the underlying meaning i always been bit lunkhead but either way i love this poem
blueloon
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4 posted 07-14-99 11:30 AM       View Profile for blueloon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for blueloon

I really liked this. The poem read fast and kept it's point strong! Welcome, Newguy!
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