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The Rain |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
(Dedicated to the man who calls me his Angel, his light in the Darkness of him.) This is what I dreampt last night... We were outside rain was pouring down up in the mountains in the summer-time we had parked the car left the music playin' and I was a-dancin' soaked from head to toe and you sat back a-top the hood you smiled while you were watchin' me my arms out-stretched rain in my face and you can see right through my white tee-shirt... I'm laughing at the pleasure of the rain upon my face and your thought right then is that you can't believe how much you love me and you decide to show me just how much... My hips are a-swayin' my arms are a-movin' and I know every single word by heart... you slide down and come to me you hold me close you dance with me and the rain keeps pourin' down you kiss my lips so softly so tender your caress and you don't even know that's all it takes for me to submit to your desire... so you keep on seducing me in this rain... so gentle upon my skin... I lose myself in to the kisses on my neck, on my shoulders in the rain... you have me feeling so completely spun... Your hands adore my body and you lay me down and I fall further and further in love with each and every part of you and then I was awaken- and I looked up through my window -it was raining outside- and I smiled. ©~onevoice~ ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Kinda glad you didn't go to sleep right away, I knew you wouldn't. Another awesome piece. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you!  ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Whew! You should go post this in the Adult Forum, too... That's the kind of dream you don't want to wake up from.  dp |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you dp! I just might have to try that! ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It has the kind of tempo that makes one rush to get to the next word! Love it! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thanx to you, too, Balladeer! ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wow wow wow tiz all one can say then woohoo and loved it |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Very good work ~One~ Must be one of the reasons we have a harder time waking up when its rainig... :-) |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you Walt! Thank you Tori! ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
You have put into words what so many of us equate with rain, for who has not been there before, and remembered a bit of it everytime when the rain falls...This was beautiful! ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you azblond! ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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