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The Rain

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~one voice~
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Billings, MT USA


0 posted 07-12-99 10:44 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ~one voice~

(Dedicated to the man who calls me his Angel, his light in the Darkness of him.)

This is what I dreampt last night...
We were outside
rain was pouring down
up in the mountains
in the summer-time
we had parked the car
left the music playin'
and I was a-dancin'
soaked from head to toe
and you sat back a-top the hood
you smiled while you were watchin' me
my arms out-stretched
rain in my face
and you can see right through my
white tee-shirt...

I'm laughing at the pleasure
of the rain upon my face
and your thought right then is that
you can't believe how much you love me
and you decide to show me just how much...

My hips are a-swayin'
my arms are a-movin'
and I know every single word by heart...
you slide down and come to me
you hold me close
you dance with me
and the rain keeps pourin' down
you kiss my lips so softly
so tender your caress
and you don't even know that's all it takes
for me to submit to your desire...
so you keep on seducing me in this rain...
so gentle upon my skin...
I lose myself in to the kisses
on my neck, on my shoulders
in the rain...
you have me feeling so completely spun...
Your hands adore my body
and you lay me down
and I fall further and further
in love with each and every part of you

and then I was awaken-
and I looked up through my window
-it was raining outside-
and I smiled.

©~onevoice~



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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
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DreamEvil
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1 posted 07-12-99 10:54 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Kinda glad you didn't go to sleep right away, I knew you wouldn't. Another awesome piece.

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~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


2 posted 07-12-99 11:39 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
doreen peri
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since 05-25-99
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Virginia


3 posted 07-12-99 01:04 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

Whew! You should go post this in the Adult Forum, too...
That's the kind of dream you don't want to wake up from.
dp
~one voice~
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4 posted 07-12-99 05:44 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you dp! I just might have to try that!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
Balladeer
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5 posted 07-12-99 05:51 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

It has the kind of tempo that makes one rush to get to the next word! Love it!
~one voice~
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6 posted 07-13-99 03:07 AM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thanx to you, too, Balladeer!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)


7 posted 07-13-99 03:17 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

wow wow wow tiz all one can say then woohoo and loved it
tori
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since 06-18-99
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Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA


8 posted 07-13-99 12:04 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

Very good work ~One~
Must be one of the reasons we have a harder time waking up when its rainig... :-)
~one voice~
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9 posted 07-13-99 01:43 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you Walt! Thank you Tori!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

azblond
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since 07-01-99
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The Steamy Desert


10 posted 07-13-99 01:48 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

You have put into words what so many of us equate with rain, for who has not been there before, and remembered a bit of it everytime when the rain falls...This was beautiful!

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
~one voice~
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11 posted 07-13-99 01:52 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Thank you azblond!

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~one voice~
*You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.*

 
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