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The Last Song of Orpheus

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DreamEvil
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25 posted 07-14-99 03:26 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

I've been high on life since the first reply. Thank you all.
Nan
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26 posted 07-14-99 06:46 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Stupendous!! Ebullient!! - there are a couple of good adjectives...
You're a welcome asset to this forum, DreamEvil...
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27 posted 07-14-99 09:08 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you again, Nan. It DOES mean alot coming from the seasoned veterans of the poetic struggle.
Ominous
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28 posted 07-16-99 01:32 AM       View Profile for Ominous   Email Ominous   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ominous

Amazingly breathtaking.
I am a fan of mythology and of music and this masterpiece really touched not only my heart but the depths of my soul.
You inspire me Dream, you the master, and I the pupil.
Congrats.
DreamEvil
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29 posted 07-16-99 02:38 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The response has been mindblowing. Thank you, Ominous.
Nicole
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30 posted 07-30-99 02:31 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I am speechless, and breathless, with tears standing in my eyes.
Rita
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31 posted 07-31-99 02:02 AM       View Profile for Rita   Email Rita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rita

This is my favorite. I am amazed how you write with such beauty. I raced to hear the end, while in awe in every verse.....wonderful...

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"And the day came, where the risk to remain tight in a bud, was more painful than the risk it took to blossom"
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32 posted 07-31-99 04:21 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Absolutely superb!

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
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33 posted 07-31-99 06:51 AM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Once again, a wonderful piece that has sweep me off my feet.. You definately have a masterpiece there...

Love,
Lady


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34 posted 07-31-99 11:28 AM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

I've now decided that I should pay attention to what is being posted. I almost missed something great here. I've got a whole list of adjectives that I save for occasions like these. Let's see...sublime, splendiferous, splendorous, opulent, slambang!!!!!!

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Even with a lot of imagination, does it make the story less true?
DreamEvil
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35 posted 07-31-99 10:22 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Thank you,again.
Gentle Soul
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36 posted 08-01-99 03:42 AM       View Profile for Gentle Soul   Email Gentle Soul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Soul

wow Dream.. 35 replies!! hehe.. well.. 36 now.. obvious an AWESOME piece of art brother hehe

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Phantom
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37 posted 08-03-99 06:04 AM       View Profile for Phantom   Email Phantom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Phantom

Absolutely Beautifully!

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Open your heart to the Darkness,set your soul free.
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38 posted 08-03-99 02:23 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Wonderfully graceful. Thank you.

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© KRJ 22 Jul 99
Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


Lucie
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39 posted 08-03-99 05:06 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

What can I say that hasn't been said..

I like it a lot.
Back to the top.

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40 posted 08-03-99 08:33 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'm at a loss for words... awesome!!! But I must agree with those who say the apology at the beginning for the length should be removed. When the read is this good, when the words are used so well, who's counting? *G*
Michael
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41 posted 08-18-99 11:22 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Masterpiece may be an understatement, DreamEvil.

This is a true Epic.

Michael
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42 posted 10-16-1999 05:28 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

'Tis the oldest of my lengthy works, but work well it does.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
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43 posted 10-16-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This piece proves you deserving of the title of Wordsmith, my dear. It is magnificent.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

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44 posted 10-20-1999 02:20 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Brother, sad I am that I had previously missed this!
But heartened that I stumbled upon it!
The magnificence of this by far outreaches any of your other works, and that is saying galaxies!
thursdayschild
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45 posted 12-17-1999 01:31 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

WOW!
Skyfyre
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46 posted 12-17-1999 03:32 AM       View Profile for Skyfyre   Email Skyfyre   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfyre

This was better than any mythology book I have ever read, and believe me, I have read more than a few.  Your talent is astounding!

As far as the length is concerned, more is better, so long as the verse is good!  I was swept through this like wildfire, and found myself disappointed when it ended so soon!

--Kess


 You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

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