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Open Poetry #1

I Wish You Knew

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

0 posted 1999-07-12 03:26 AM

I wish you knew
How much I love you
I wish I knew
You loved me too
I wish you knew
I'll always be here
Wishing you
would want me there.

jfreak
Member

since 1999-06-17

Posts 306
Yuma, AZ, USA

1 posted 1999-07-12 12:46 PM

Very well done and well put. This is a really nice poem. Keep up the good work.

JFreak

tulip
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since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

2 posted 1999-07-13 02:14 AM

Thanks jfreak! It's always nice to hear somebody enjoyed it!

Princess Lily
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since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

3 posted 1999-07-14 12:46 PM

This a great poem.And so very true

we only see what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

[This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-14-99).]

tulip
Member

since 1999-07-04

Posts 320
unknown

4 posted 1999-07-17 03:26 AM

That's true...thanks for reading it Princess Lily!

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