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please read my poems, i crave info

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4eqinox2leanne0
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0 posted 07-12-99 01:52 AM       View Profile for 4eqinox2leanne0   Email 4eqinox2leanne0   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 4eqinox2leanne0

my love
taste of my body; sip of my soul
inhale my want need love for you
alone
please
allow
me to drown in your midnight
ocean eyes
to die for your sweet love
my love
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mia
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1 posted 07-12-99 09:22 AM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I really like it. Short and simple yet so inexplicably complicated...

"taste of my body;sip of my soul"
that is really deep. I like your free verse style.

Show me more!!!
mia
 
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