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orpheus
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0 posted 07-12-99 01:06 AM       View Profile for orpheus   Email orpheus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for orpheus

His lips are there
Fainting in her mouth
Drowning
They are joining two pieces of a whole
They are stealing each other's soul
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snuffleupagus
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if his lips were fainting in her mouth, wouldn't they be slack? kindof like kissing a dead person.
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How nice it is to be reminded of what a kiss should be.
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