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Dear Sister Moon

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lenny
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0 posted 07-11-99 05:41 PM       View Profile for lenny   Email lenny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lenny

Platinum beams cascade from celestial heights
Illumining the hills, routing the night
Silver scented love fills my soul
Glimmering joy sings, permeating all.
November cold, alive, tumbles down the windowpane
Playing tag with warm furnace currents
And rejoicing in Sister Moons fullness
Dances on my cheeks, gladdening my spirit.
Gracefully silent She arcs the sky
Wondrously still in Her movement
Watching, touching, blessing,
Knowing...
Calling forth the tide of my heart
In swells of oceanic joy
To Her bosom of immortality
She draws me near.
Sea of Tranquility
Shimmering above, shimmering within
Ignite my spirit with cosmic ardor
And inundate the shores of my being.
© Copyright 1999 lenny - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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1 posted 07-11-99 08:58 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

This is beatiful. Really.
Nice job.

dp
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2 posted 07-11-99 09:28 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Imagery and phrasing second to none. Very nice indeed.
Lost Dreamer
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3 posted 07-24-99 12:30 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Excellent! Loved the line"Playing tag with warm furnace currents"
Poet deVine
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4 posted 07-24-99 12:45 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful!
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5 posted 09-23-2001 06:42 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Lenny~
This is just very, very lovely~

I hope your e-mail is still valid ...
and you come back to join our circle~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

 
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