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Adrift

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Tim
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0 posted 07-11-99 03:29 PM       View Profile for Tim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tim

Upon the wings of eagles,
...adrift upon the wind,
Upon a time were lovers,
...what caused our love to end?

When I gazed upon your face,
...t'was kissed by morning sun,
Now in my thoughts when you do come,
...I feel as day is done.

Below I spy the vast expanse,
...of all that ever was,
Wilted petals of the rose,
...hearts' unrequited loves.

I look to the horizon,
...to see what is to come,
Am blinded by my memories,
...have lost to love aplomb.

Circling on the winds above,
...I fear will never land,
I fear that I shall never love,
...Since time I lost your hand.



[This message has been edited by Tim (edited 07-11-99).]
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-11-99 05:19 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Tim, there's a consistency of quality in your poetry. Wonderful poem with an underlying sadness!
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2 posted 07-11-99 09:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

She's right, Tim. Quality is present in everything you create. But.....cheer up!!!!!
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3 posted 07-12-99 12:41 AM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

This is such an eloquent expression of love
lost. Truly touching work. Thank you Tim for
sharing your heart.
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4 posted 07-12-99 07:37 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

The others said it well. Thank you for this piece.

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