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Micah
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My thoughts are perceived through eyes that know not my existance.
Although she is crafty to presume that I am simple, little does she know the complexity that I share in deep feelings of passion only for her..
Our vintage strides we take each day hold all the worth in the world to me yet
I am invisible to her..
Her radiant hair, her simple laugh
if only there to cause a subtle hint of what she's hidding most..
The way she walks bring only the still pleasure that make statues jealous..
That smell...
It is like a cool breeze atop a distant ocean..
The breeze caries with it many scents of which are gathered into one..
These scents constitue many, but together
they are like perfection
Perfection that I adore.....

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1 posted 07-11-99 01:49 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is lovely, Micah! I hope you've shown her this poem!
Alwye
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Yes, I agree with Miss DeVine. I sure hope you've shown this to her. It is excellent!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter
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