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Unspoken Words II (With apologies to Baladeer)

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Poetwheel
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0 posted 07-11-99 12:41 PM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

her: Hi there handsome, how's it going? Weathers looking poor today.
(Don't go looking for your checkbook, or your visa, or your pay)

him: I think the weathers gonna clear, a little sun is all it takes...
(By-the-way dear jezebel, been in your car? Have you tried the brakes?)

her: Perhaps your right...we should do lunch, oh wait, I made another plan...
(got to cash your stocks and bonds, and book the flight to Kobe, Japan)

him: No sweat my sweet, I'm busy too, figured I would mow the grass...
(maybe Shirley's free today, I'd love to have that piece of ...

her: As for later on, you have to fetch your supper, dear.
(Theres arsenic in the vinegar and rat poison in your precious beer)

him: no trouble, love, no problem here, I'll have a salad and some tea
(Yahoo! Won't have to hear her nag, its fries and beer and prime t.v.)

her: So, whats on you card this week? You still have bowling with good old John?
(Not that I really give a crap, Miguel an
I will soon be gone)

him: Oh yeah! I had forgotten that, don't want to let down friendly John!
(Who actually is known to me as sweet Marie LeParnagon)

her: Well I should go, I'll see you soon, until then, I love you so.
(At least your money, and your house, and your uncle, don't you know)

him: Ok, well best of luck to you, can't wait until you're back with me
(They never peel you from that car, once wrapped around a cherry tree)



her & him: SUCKER!

PW



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Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-11-99 01:45 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Thanks for the laugh! I think you should keep this couple around for more he/she poetry! They obviously belong together!
Poetwheel
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2 posted 07-11-99 01:58 PM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

Good idea, but sadly, I think that her car ride and his dinner may spell the end... perhaps the next phone call will be from different wings of the Droverville Count Hospital?.. Thanks!
PW

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Balladeer
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3 posted 07-11-99 04:34 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

How you could take my warm, sincere, touching poem and turn it into a hilarious masterpiece is beyond me....and I love it! Thank you
Craig
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4 posted 07-11-99 05:14 PM       View Profile for Craig   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Craig

I believe you should create a serial, throw in a shower scene where one of them dies and comes back Welsh only to discover that Wales is only a dream.

I : But learn an important lesson lest some clever fellow copies your copied style and grace
( methinks that I may try, and I shall call it Patent Place )
ac
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5 posted 07-13-99 08:22 AM       View Profile for ac   Email ac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ac

you know this couple too...i adored it...thanks for sharing it...
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6 posted 07-13-99 02:46 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

This belongs to the Community Poetry line...where we can all add on a telephone party line connection of various (dis)contented lovers. Congrats to both you and Balladeer!

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7 posted 07-13-99 03:13 PM       View Profile for Ladycat   Email Ladycat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ladycat's Home Page   View IP for Ladycat

Absolutely wonderful both of you.. Nice couple.. Sounds like my ex and I though.. HUH? Have you been looking into my life again? Oh well, thank you for the hilarious piece..

Love,
Lady


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Andrew Scott
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8 posted 07-13-99 04:33 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Very well orchestrated. Undoubtedly they did each other in and are headed to the same warm place in the afterlife. Perhaps their story should continue there. What could be more hellish? Thanks for a good laugh.
Poetwheel
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9 posted 07-17-99 12:42 AM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

I would enjoy teaming up with Baladeer in a shared telephone conversation, as I'm sure most would. With his pen, he could make the worst of us look good! How about it B?
PW

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