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I'll love you still...

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teleo
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0 posted 07-11-99 11:21 AM       View Profile for teleo   Email teleo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teleo

Authors note; This reflects a love from a distance, unrequited for 21 years... until
just recently. (sometimes good things do come to those who wait)


I'll love you my dear,
Till the end of time.
till the tide ebbs no more,
At lifes lonely shore.
Till the earth grows cold to its very core.
I'll love you still, NEED I SAY MORE?

When the world closes in,
And peace can't be found.
Our homes and our lives
lay in ruins all around.
And our bodies are tired...Weary and sore.
I'll love you still, NEED I SAY MORE?

When life plays its dirty
tricks and misdeeds.
When Fall brings her cold,
And trees shed their leaves.
When you find your self standing on lifes lonely shore,
I'll love you still, NEED I SAY MORE?

With all of this said,
And my heart on the line.
Do you think you might... Spare a bit of your time?
To ponder the love from this lonely man,
Share my hearts song, and then take my hand?
I love you still, and I always will!
NEED I SAY MORE?

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[This message has been edited by teleo (edited 07-11-99).]

[This message has been edited by teleo (edited 07-11-99).]
© Copyright 1999 teleo - All Rights Reserved
Micah
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1 posted 07-11-99 02:28 PM       View Profile for Micah   Email Micah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Micah

I like your style of writting. It was moving and I felt it...good job
Poet deVine
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2 posted 07-11-99 05:12 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent work! It's heartwarming to know that you and your love finally got together, gives me hope. Welcome to the family!


teleo
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3 posted 07-11-99 05:57 PM       View Profile for teleo   Email teleo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teleo

Thank you for the positive critique.
I have written a number of items like this,
some from personal exp. some more achromatic.
"I'll love you still" was written in 1986
at one of my low points in life.
I will post more as I go. Again; Thanks!
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