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orpheus
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0 posted 07-10-99 11:38 PM       View Profile for orpheus   Email orpheus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for orpheus

Sometimes I'm cold
No smiles, no tears, no sound
Cold and alone in the dark in this corner
Darker than you
Darker in you

And you are smiling
And you are dancing
And you are throwing kisses like roses
And you are cutting cutting me deep

I am here, bleeding still

What you want is what you burn is what I feel
To feel is to lose
And I have felt you way too much
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Poet deVine
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1 posted 07-11-99 12:34 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Excellent! This is the first poem of yours I've read and will find the others to read more! So sad.....

breatheyou
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2 posted 07-11-99 03:09 AM       View Profile for breatheyou   Email breatheyou   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for breatheyou

I've felt so incredibly touched by your passionate sad sad poem...
eurydice
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I guess only someone who had really loved can write a poem with such pain and beauty. I liked it very much.
hoot_owl_rn
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Excellent poem...I was told once that a poet had to fall in or out of love to write... SOmetimes it seems so. This poem is a wonderful expression of loss displayed so perfectly. The flow in this really works. Thanks for sharing.
 
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