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azblond
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0 posted 07-10-99 05:42 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for azblond

Another Dream

Have you ever had a dream
That you wanted so bad to be true
I had one so very real
It was about me and you
We were together so happily
Your girl a thing of the past
We shared a love so sweet and true
And I hoped it would last
I know it was only a dream
But it revealed feelings I had
You made me so happy
When before I was so sad
I should know better than to believe
A dream that could never be right
But inside I hoped and prayed
That just somehow it might
My dream now has ended
With the sad reality
She’s the one you love so true
And it never will be me.


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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
tori
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1 posted 07-10-99 07:36 PM       View Profile for tori   Email tori   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tori's Home Page   View IP for tori

A Dream so true Az... One I think many have shared....Good work!
Dragoness
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2 posted 08-10-99 05:23 AM       View Profile for Dragoness   Email Dragoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Dragoness's Home Page   View IP for Dragoness

Well done AZ.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.
angel girl
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within a whisper...


3 posted 08-10-99 07:48 AM       View Profile for angel girl   Email angel girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for angel girl

wow, this brought up a few memories for me. i regret not being able to be with the person i want to be with, we are still good friends and i treasure that. even though it hurts terribly not being able to be with HIM like i want, i'm glad i know him.
this was very good.

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delight in the little things.
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on the threshold of a dream


4 posted 08-10-99 08:35 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I'm sorry your dreams didn't come true... nice poem!
Sue
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5 posted 08-10-99 09:06 AM       View Profile for Sue   Email Sue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sue

If you go on having dreams, one day one of them will come true.
azblond
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6 posted 08-11-99 10:13 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

wow...all the positive response...thank you! This piece was actually in my archive of High School poems...written on old paper that is now yellowing...The reminder that sometimes dreams don't come true for a reason!

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For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting...

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7 posted 02-11-2002 07:06 PM       View Profile for RosePetal   Email RosePetal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RosePetal

nice poem. Enjoyed it
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