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Grapefruit Invasion *or* Citrus AttacK!
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Grapefruit Invasion *or* Citrus AttacK! |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Horace smoothed his cat, Mr. Ghummy, and sat back in his green La-Z-boy. As he readied himself to sip upon his Salibury shake he heard a noise like no other... In a moment, he knew THEY were back! Falling from the sky Landing on some guy squirts into the eye kiss your butt goodbye! We are the malcontent Grapefruit from the Planet Citrene! We have come to claim this country as our own! Take your leave, humans, or feel our sting in your vulnerable eyes! Falling from the sky Landing on some guy squirts into the eye kiss your butt goodbye! They came. They conquered. We left. Oh well, mused Horace, being a floating space vagabond isn't soooo bad, eh Mr. Ghummy? "Meow Shut up, Meow!" ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
At last like looking for the holy grail this one.... I like the way you write can we have more? |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Certainly! But in the interim, check out our website at sites.netscape.net/poetwheel Be sure to sign the guestbook! Thanks! PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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Aly Junior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 35 |
Very funny, but I don't know if my intepretation was right. ANYWAY... keep them coming, and I'll see what kind of poetry I can give u!  |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Ah Poetwheel, You are such a GOOF!! But I mean that in the kindest way possible, for I love the way you write. Keep me laughing some more, I wipe my eyes not from tears, but from that acidic grapefruit squeeze! ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
I signed your book stop liked the name ‘Crumblesausage’ stop may adopt it stop goes well with Craig stop "You write it, I'll read it...WE like it." Don’t stop End Transmission |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
The collective Poetic Wheelbarrow overflows with sun-sweetened melon juice from your kind praise! Thank you all for your kind ramblings! PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm not sure which planet you're from, not even sure I can pick the galaxy, but I'm glad you decided to settle on Earth! |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Thank you baladeer! To be sure, we are earthlings, though it has been proven that our forefathers came from Delphi IV in the Ghastrib Conclave... PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
hilarious! damn, you're good! thanks for the |
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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
This will be a classic. I can feel it. *L* |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
thursdays child - truly glad you enjoy this stuff! moonlight - your really think its classic material? I shall submit it to the board for review....with your reccomend of course... Thanks! PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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