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Nocturnal Kiss

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azblond
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0 posted 07-10-99 01:49 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for azblond

Nocturnal Kiss

The silence is eerie
I’m late… did he leave?
He asked me to meet him
At the start of the eve
My eyes are adjusting
To the lack of light
The hairs on my arms
Are standing in fright
The darkness is deafening
No sound does escape
Then suddenly I glimpse
His signature cape
Why does he not speak
If he is already here?
Is he enjoying
Seeing my fear?
I call out his name
But receive no reply
Then I feel his cold hand
And I finally sigh
I laugh at my terror
Afraid of the night!
Then my senses all leave
Some things not right…
He’s kissing my neck
But his caress is so sharp
From somewhere there’s music
The sound…a harp?
But this could not be real
In this day and age
When reggae and hip hop
Are all the rage
I’m growing weak
From his sweet kiss
I raise my hand
Wait…what is this?
The stain on my neck
Where his lips had been
I cannot believe
This has happened!
I awake to the eve
My senses are tight
To the ever clear fact
I no longer live in the light.


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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
Poetwheel
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since 07-07-99
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1 posted 07-10-99 01:56 PM       View Profile for Poetwheel   Email Poetwheel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Poetwheel's Home Page   View IP for Poetwheel

Excellent vampire piece! I have an old friend who teached gothic fiction, I'm going to show her this one...she'll eat it up!
PW

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azblond
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2 posted 07-10-99 02:24 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

I'm glad you enjoyed it...I love to write these tales!

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
thursdayschild
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since 07-01-99
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3 posted 07-10-99 06:49 PM       View Profile for thursdayschild   Email thursdayschild   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for thursdayschild

spooky! I like this! Thanks for sharing.
elvira
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since 07-06-99
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4 posted 07-10-99 07:54 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

simply marvelous...i imagined gary oldman as "dracul" while reading it...thanks for the delightful shivers down my spine


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i never call a poem "nice" or such,
for that would not be saying much

DreamEvil
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5 posted 07-10-99 10:51 PM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

Inspired by me? No, my dear, you are inspiring me!!

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azblond
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6 posted 07-10-99 11:00 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

Flattery will get you all everything you need!! Thanks for the kind words...DreamEvil, I think we make quite a duo then!

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