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Memories of my First Love... |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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Memories of My First Love… I thought I was weak Because I started to cry When you would push me Or tell me a lie I thought I was wrong When I’d argue with you As you slung accusations That just weren’t true I thought it would change If I tried a little more But the hits got harder And there were more in store I thought I was lonely When you went away So I looked for you everywhere And begged you to stay I thought that you loved me As your words sliced my heart As I begged for you to not Let it all fall apart I thought we were perfect But finally I see You were never The one for me I thought it would hurt If we were ended forever But I know it would hurt more If it happened never ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Been there... very well-written! I like your style!  ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Better to have loved and lost, azblond? I agree. Nicely done....again. |
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