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Memories of my First Love...

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azblond
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0 posted 07-10-99 01:31 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for azblond

Memories of My First Love…

I thought I was weak
Because I started to cry
When you would push me
Or tell me a lie
I thought I was wrong
When I’d argue with you
As you slung accusations
That just weren’t true
I thought it would change
If I tried a little more
But the hits got harder
And there were more in store
I thought I was lonely
When you went away
So I looked for you everywhere
And begged you to stay
I thought that you loved me
As your words sliced my heart
As I begged for you to not
Let it all fall apart
I thought we were perfect
But finally I see
You were never
The one for me
I thought it would hurt
If we were ended forever
But I know it would hurt more
If it happened never


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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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since 07-08-99
Posts 668
Billings, MT USA


1 posted 07-10-99 01:36 PM       View Profile for ~one voice~   Email ~one voice~   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ~one voice~

Been there... very well-written! I like your style!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James
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Better to have loved and lost, azblond? I agree. Nicely done....again.
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