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azblond
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

0 posted 1999-07-10 01:13 PM


Over

No more chances
No more tries
All we shared
Were just lies
I loved you true
You loved me not
Our hopes and dreams
Are totally shot
You have her
And I’m alone
Our parting words
Were on the phone
I let you win
Now there’s no more
I’ll finally walk out
And you slam the door.


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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08
Posts 664
Billings, MT USA
1 posted 1999-07-10 01:22 PM


I really like this azblond... it's straight and to the point, yet full of emotion. Thanks for sharing it!

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~one voice~

For Myself, I live,
Live intensely and am fed by life,
and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James

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