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A Lazy Day at the Droverville Nat'l Park
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A Lazy Day at the Droverville Nat'l Park |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Parrots regurgitate crunchibles while I sit on well written bench. The goodly bum at my feet coughs and smiles through his pine-sol'd sleep... A lone dog pees A madman screams A child steals a congo-cone... Diversification. Dyslexia. Horror in a frozen treat. Its all out there. "YOU CAN'T PARK THERE!" Ignoramus. Dis-enchantress. Toilet free societal crapper. Flushing. Flushing. Evermore... Then, a pasty, albeit rum flavored sweep of gorgonzola? Exeunt! ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Vivid, very vivid, Poetwheel! I liked it!  ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Thanks one! This is about as deep as the Wheel gets... glad you enjoyed it... PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Since I was asked via email... Gorgonzola: rich cheese with bluish green veins. So now you know! PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
Wow...this is awesome! Love the images you created here. Good work! |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
hey thursday! Keep this up and people with think we're paying you!... PW PS The check is in the mail... ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Call me crazy. Call me ill If you don't do it, someone will, But I will never get my fill Of happenings at Droverville. [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 07-11-99).] |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Nice work Baladeer! I say, we must make you an honorary member of the Poetic Wheelbarrow! Your badge, propeller hat, 3D glasses and fake nose are being sent by courier. Thanks! PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://sites.netscape.net/poetwheel |
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