navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #1 » Goodnight
Open Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Goodnight Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
azblond
Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

0 posted 1999-07-10 04:29 AM


Goodnight

Goodnight cold world
I can play no more
I’ve walked along your paths
And found too often a closed door
Goodnight bright sun
The shadows finally win
I’ve tried to bask in your glory
But the warmth never reached within
Goodnight sweet dream
You are too unreal
I’ve suffered too many disappointments
And the scars—they will not heal
Goodnight to my hope
I’ve finally let go
I cannot take the game
If asked I will say no
Goodnight dearest friends
I’ll close my eyes forever
Just realize if you can
I lost this last endeavor.


------------------
Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

© Copyright 1999 MiChelle Van Vleet - All Rights Reserved
Craig
Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444

1 posted 1999-07-10 11:45 AM


Way too good, They must have missed this as it went by, I can't believe that no-ones replied..

lets give them another chance

azblond
Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
2 posted 1999-07-10 11:56 AM


Craig...I think my late night ramblings are beginning to catch up with me, the posts usually end up buried by time the rest of the world wakes up! Thanx for responding...I'm glad you enjoyed!

------------------
Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #1 » Goodnight

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary