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Dedicated to Men

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Cinderella
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0 posted 07-10-99 04:25 AM       View Profile for Cinderella   Email Cinderella   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Cinderella

Trying to make you smile I knew,
Blue gum I continuously did chew.
But this did not make you laugh,
Infact you told me you wanted to barf.

What does it take to giggle at me
It seems nothing can make this be.
Forever to bring your happiness out,
All you do is scream and loudly shout!

I finally believe that you are sadistic
For off you go and become bolistic.
People should be enjoying their life
But you are like a nagging old wife.

It is not too late to amend your ways,
To dream ahead you have so many days.
So sad, but true, you will never change
You are like a dog that has the mange!

I finally know it is time for me to leave
For you will never think or believe,
That laughter can give you a sigh of new breath
And make you stop thinking of yourself or death!

Starting another wave of life can bring you much fun,
Don't rehash your marriage that is over and done!
Just think of next week when you are to appear in court
Your divorce will be final, so you will have to pay HIM support!!


[This message has been edited by Cinderella (edited 07-10-99).]
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azblond
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1 posted 07-10-99 04:31 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

I liked this one...it made me laugh. What a great story here!

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...
Nan
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2 posted 07-10-99 10:49 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Very cute, Cinderella.....
Poet deVine
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3 posted 07-10-99 12:11 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Funny poem but there's truth in there too!
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