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Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 152
Arizona

0 posted 1999-07-10 04:25 AM


Trying to make you smile I knew,
Blue gum I continuously did chew.
But this did not make you laugh,
Infact you told me you wanted to barf.

What does it take to giggle at me
It seems nothing can make this be.
Forever to bring your happiness out,
All you do is scream and loudly shout!

I finally believe that you are sadistic
For off you go and become bolistic.
People should be enjoying their life
But you are like a nagging old wife.

It is not too late to amend your ways,
To dream ahead you have so many days.
So sad, but true, you will never change
You are like a dog that has the mange!

I finally know it is time for me to leave
For you will never think or believe,
That laughter can give you a sigh of new breath
And make you stop thinking of yourself or death!

Starting another wave of life can bring you much fun,
Don't rehash your marriage that is over and done!
Just think of next week when you are to appear in court
Your divorce will be final, so you will have to pay HIM support!!


[This message has been edited by Cinderella (edited 07-10-99).]

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azblond
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since 1999-07-01
Posts 637
The Steamy Desert
1 posted 1999-07-10 04:31 AM


I liked this one...it made me laugh. What a great story here!

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Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
2 posted 1999-07-10 10:49 AM


Very cute, Cinderella.....

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-07-10 12:11 PM


Funny poem but there's truth in there too!
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