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Graveyard Visit

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azblond
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The Steamy Desert


0 posted 07-10-99 04:23 AM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for azblond

Graveyard Visit

I entered the graveyard
As the wind howled by
I noticed the trees
And stared at the sky
I saw a young girl
On her knees she did weep
Was it for her lover
Who had entered eternal sleep?
I walked a step closer
And reached to touch her shoulder
And looked into the eyes
Of a woman much older
Then stared at the emptiness
Of where she had been
And looked at the tombstone
Which stated who was within
A young girl had died
Was she a ghost who sat here?
I rushed out of the graveyard
Trembling with fear.


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DreamEvil
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Great darkness, give us more!

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elvira
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chilling indeed...brava

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Sally S.
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Oooooo, a little spoooooky. I like it! Great work, azblond!

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