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Lip Gloss And Bubble Gum

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Alain DeLaCendres
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since 07-02-99
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Ohio


0 posted 07-10-99 01:51 AM       View Profile for Alain DeLaCendres   Email Alain DeLaCendres   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alain DeLaCendres

After these past months,
would your mouth still taste the same
if I were to kiss you?

Would your lips still
have that thin layer
of strawberry to savor?

Could your tongue
still sneak itís way
into my mouth?

Well; if the words that pass
from oneís lips were to determine their taste,
I want no part of yours.

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Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie.
© Copyright 1999 Alain DeLaCendres - All Rights Reserved
jfreak
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since 06-17-99
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1 posted 07-10-99 02:44 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

What a wonderful poem about such sweet memories and what a way to end it. This is a pretty powerful poem about how we should always watch what we say. The bible says, "Life and death are held in the power of the tongue." How much do we say that we never notice but most likely will regret later?
Great poem.

Jfreak
mia
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2 posted 07-12-99 10:01 AM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

I was kind of suprised by the ending... I liked it a lot... I know how you feel... Sometimes the taste of the sweetest lips can hide a deadly venom...

I really liked it...
mia
mia
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3 posted 08-08-99 09:39 AM       View Profile for mia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mia

Back to the top you go...
I really like this one...
mia
elvira
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4 posted 08-09-99 09:31 PM       View Profile for elvira   Email elvira   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for elvira

words that are too sweet can leave a bad taste in your mouth as well though
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