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Never been Kissed (has nothing to do with the movie -- please tell me what you think!

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Delilah
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since 07-08-99
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The Wonderful America


0 posted 07-10-99 01:14 AM       View Profile for Delilah   Email Delilah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Delilah


Will I never feel his kiss?
His beautiful lips against my own?
Will I never feel the warmth and the passion
turn to bliss?
Will I never feel his sweater
rubbing up under my cheek?
His dark, luscious lashes never shall I meet.
Will I never feel our throbbing hearts melted
into one?
They call it lust, I call it yearn.
Oh how I long to be kissed.
© Copyright 1999 Delilah - All Rights Reserved
jfreak
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since 06-17-99
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Yuma, AZ, USA


1 posted 07-10-99 02:37 AM       View Profile for jfreak   Email jfreak   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jfreak

Your poem doesn't fit the normal mold when it comes to rhyme scheme. The way you wrote the rhyme into this poem, makes it flow beautifully. I know you probably didn't intend for this to reflect off of the movie but it does so.....beautifully. You have done a wonderful job here. Keep up the great work.

JFreak
 
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